Tuesday, March 22, 2011
Blog #4 "the allegory of the cave"
prisoner dwell in the cave which has open towards the light ; here they have bodies chaind so they can't move however thay can see only their shasows. they use to live in dark den. if suddenly they have freedom to walk and look at the sun lihgt, they must suffer from glare sun and it will be able to distress them. Morever, the real world should be different that they imagined in the cave. thery might not want to belong in strange world. they may want to stay den where they use to live even it is dark .
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Hello my name is Lis, I am from the class English 101.2681. I believe your summary is good but you should express your ideas more clearly. At the end of your summary you hit the main idea if worded a little different it would be so much better. However you should have included your supporting ideas, which are texts from the excerpts that back up the main idea. Also the style in which you wrote in its more for poetry rather than a summary.
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